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I hope for once,
Thunder can catch up
To the swift lightning.

For I lament thunder’s curse
Of his eternal step behind
His careless lover.

And every time
I, too, cry

Along to thunder’s downpour
When he misses her footsteps.
©2006-2008 ~xiccibanx
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Inspired by the rainstorms we've been having lately.
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~spyke1of24:iconspyke1of24: Jul 2, 2006, 9:59:56 AM
short and sweet. pretty good

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~xiccibanx:iconxiccibanx: Jul 2, 2006, 11:45:27 AM
Thanks :)

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~misinterpretated:iconmisinterpretated: Jul 2, 2006, 3:09:46 PM
w0w ive never thought of it like that w0w i rele rele like it! :clap:

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~Smerek:iconSmerek: Jul 2, 2006, 3:38:11 PM
I really love the flow of the poem, very great! Short and sweet's always best.
~xiccibanx:iconxiccibanx: Jul 2, 2006, 5:01:54 PM
Thank you for reading :)

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~Reality cannot not exist without fantasy~
~xiccibanx:iconxiccibanx: Jul 2, 2006, 5:02:08 PM
Hehe thanks :)

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~Reality cannot not exist without fantasy~
*pigletface:iconpigletface: Jul 3, 2006, 2:42:05 AM
nice image that, i'd never thought of it in that way either. of course thunder does appear at the same time if the storm is right over your head ;)
~xiccibanx:iconxiccibanx: Jul 3, 2006, 5:59:09 AM
Thanks for reading :)

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~Reality cannot not exist without fantasy~
~gabrielsfilth:icongabrielsfilth: Jul 3, 2006, 9:20:14 PM
Hey I love the personification you have used. It's really cool :) I love it.

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